Management Question

I need help humanizing an assignment. I hired a tutor to complete it for me, but despite specifically requesting no AI, he used it anyway so I can’t submit it as-is. The assignment is an email response to a pitch, where I’m playing the role of a professor replying to a student named Melissa. The email itself isn’t bad, it just reads like AI wrote it. I’d like it rewritten to sound more natural while still being professional and well-written. I’ll attach the doc that needs to be fixed, along with an example that received a 100, and my professor’s directions for reference.

Teachers’

Directions: Description: Team members will receive one pitch from one of their teammates via team exchange. It doesn’t matter whose you receive, as long as all members have exchanged Pitches within their team (i.e., Member 1 to Member 2, Member 2 to Member 3, and so on). The message should indicate why moving forward on the pitch is not feasible at this time. This is NOT a team assignment. Each student should complete this assignment.

Any opportunities for improvements/faulty logic with the pitch will be researched and described with evidence. You will source your research in-text using APA format. You do not need a references page for this assignment. The decline message should clearly indicate why moving forward with their pitch is not feasible at this time using the direct format of a decline message as shown in the text. This decline message should read as more than a stock email rejection. Be a human, you must do some research on their proposal, and tell them the honest, empathetic, real truth that you won’t be adopting their idea.

This is NOT a team assignment. Each individual student should complete this assignment.

You should include the following in your feedback:

Restate your understanding of the recommendation.
Evaluate the recommendation quality, logic, and research.
Suggest ways the employee can improve the recommendation or make a stronger argument by using your own research.

REQUIRED:

LABEL THE COMPONENTS OF YOUR BAD NEWS MESSAGE IN YOUR EMAIL. Not using the required labels mean no points earned for this assignment. You can use highlights, text boxes, capital letters, parenthesis, etc. to make your labels stand out.

Required labels in your response:

Buffer-select a buffer AND name the buffer style you used (Ch.12)
Bad News
Rationale
Impact
Goodwill

I have provided examples of quality, but not perfect, Bad News messages on Canvas. Be honest in your evaluation of the idea. As a colleague, you have a responsibility to tell the person who submitted the pitch that it is not a sound idea in its current state. I will be the only reader of your assignment, so practice giving a useful critique now when the only thing at stake is an assignment score, not your career. Every idea will likely have some merit, so be careful about dismissing the idea entirely and discouraging the student from working to improve the recommendation/never giving another recommendation.

Als make sure it says Manually Written on the top and Keep in cite text citations. Also this assignment won’t take too long

WRITE MY PAPER

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