Writing Project 1 Revision: Drafting and Adding Evidence to your Draft

Step 1 Draft, Edit, Revise, and Add 1 Quote to the draft

Reread your Writing Project 1 Draft. Read it aloud to someone in your home and note all necessary revisions.
Add evidence to your paragraph from the Malcolm X piece we read for Reading Response 1. Include 1 direct quote from the Malcom X reading to your paragraph. Include analysis of the quote (explain how and why it supports your topic sentence and story).
Be sure you follow PIE carefully as you revise. Be sure to have an arguable topic sentence, include clear evidence (personal story and Malcom X quote). And after each piece of evidence, please add analysis; explain how the evidence supports your topic sentence.

Step 2 Fill out the attached Writing Project 1 Revision worksheet

Please fill out the worksheet and submit this worksheet with your revision paragraph.

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