This is my TOK essay. At this stage, the main priority is writing quality. The essay needs to be clearly and elegantly written, with strong academic language, precise phrasing, and a smooth, logical flow throughout.
Ive attached both my original draft and the revised version. Please make sure that all previous corrections are fully implemented, that the argument is tight and coherent, and that the essay reads as a polished, high-level TOK piece. There should be no repetition, no awkward phrasing, and no grammatical or language errors.
The final word count must be strictly between 1550 and 1600 words, and the overall result should clearly reflect A-level quality, both in terms of ideas and written expression.
Thank you for your support.
Attached Files (PDF/DOCX): TOK Essay Corrected version.pdf, TOK Old version.pdf
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