Research proposal proofreading

I revised my research proposal to shift the focus more clearly from an industry-centered approach to an environmental governance and policy perspective. In the earlier version, the proposal leaned more toward industrial strategy and applied policy recommendations. However, I refined the framing to emphasize institutional governance, policy integration, and environmentalenergy policy analysis rather than industry development or investment strategy. The core topic (PSH and energy-intensive industries in China and South Korea) remains the same, but I clarified that the study is not about technical optimization or industrial planning. Instead, it focuses on institutional feasibility, regulatory structures, and governance coordination in environmental and energy transitions. Could you please proofread it with attention to: 1. Clarity and academic tone 2. Consistency in terminology (especially framework, institutional, policy integration) 3. Grammar and awkward phrasing