I am currently working on a group project for my graduate class, and I would appreciate your help reviewing and paraphrasing a short section of my report.
The attached file contains a draft section that I prepared for our background report. The specific question I am addressing is:
How many people or what percentage of the population are affected by the condition being addressed?
Our project is titled Aquatic Hand, which focuses on developing a hand rehabilitation assistive device for use in aquatic therapy.
I would like your help to:
- Paraphrase the content in your own words
- Edit or adjust the wording to sound natural and appropriate for graduate-level writing
- Make any improvements you think are necessary for clarity or flow
Please feel free to add, remove, or modify content as you see fit. I want to ensure the final version reflects my understanding of the topic and meets academic writing standards.
Requirements: Na

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