Peer Review of Cindy Vidrio’s Topic Section

My professor wants us to do a peer review on another classmate’s paper. He has assigned me Cindy’s draft of the Topic Section only. He has made videos explaining how he wants us to do the peer review, so I will link them below. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zYxopMcpJlo

I have also attached her paper exactly how she sent it to me. Thank you.