Influencing Through Example

Introduction

Thesis/Claim

“When trying to influence others it is imperative to set a good example.”

Body paragraph 1

Main point/Topic

“in a professional setting having good work ethic and integrity is imperative to influence others to do the right thing.”

Evidence/Example

“having good work ethic is imperative to be able to influence others to have to same work ethic.”

Reasoning/Explanation

“having good work ethic like arriving early, staying focused, and work hard will spark a similar work ethic in others. this will create a better work environment for everyone, helping work to get done quicker.”

Evidence/Example

“having integrity is imperative to be able to influence others to do the right thing”

Reasoning/Explanation

“having integrity in things like arguments and mistakes will spark everyone to prioritize integrity in the workplace environment. thus creating a better workplace environment and promote trust.”

Body paragraph 2

Main point/Topic

“in a parenting and mentorship setting having healthy habits and kindness is imperative to influence others like children to do the right thing.”

Evidence/Example

“having healthy habits in a parenting and mentorship setting is imperative for them to learn what the right thing is.”

Reasoning/Explanation

“having healthy habits in parenting and mentorship like consistently eating healthy food and exercising is imperative for the children to learn what they should do and shouldnt do.”

Evidence/Example

“having kindness in a parenting and metoriship setting is imperative for them to learn how to interact the right way.”

Reasoning/Explanation

“having kindness in parenting and mentorship like showing kindness acts to service staff or neighbors will teach the children what is the right way to interact and show respect to others.”

Body paragraph 3

Main point/Topic

“just setting a good example is not the best way to influence others.”

Evidence/Example

“motivational speeches are the best way to influence others.”

Reasoning/Explanation

“motivational speeches pull emotiontions out of the listener’s heat and influences them to go along with whatever the speaker is saying.”

Evidence/Example

“in a lot of motivational speeches there is action being taken to go along with the speech.”

Reasoning/Explanation

“speeches like martin luther king junior’s speech had actions to go along with it to e able to influence others to listen and follow.”