Food Insecurity

Teachers notes:

Complete a draft of your Mission Possible: The Problem research paper (3-4 double-spaced pages of content, excluding cover page/heading, references, visuals). APA-formatted in-text citations and reference list are required.

Good start. However, citations are missing. If citations are missing from the final version, the assignment grade would not be satisfactory (much larger deduction, as per the syllabus).

Please note that the citations need to be accurate when they are integrated (it can be difficult to cite correctly after the fact). You will need to double-check everything. Also, more citations are needed than the places currently marked (cite).

Define food insecurity.

More evidence/data over time is needed to tell the story. There is a lot of content available on the web regarding this. Work to make your content as specific as possible. The history could be more clear as well. Content reorganization is needed.

This paper is about the problem. In the conclusion, you can mention key barriers and general pathways for improvement, but there is a different project that focuses on programs/solutions.

Final version needs at least 4 peer-reviewed sources (out of 10+ sources).

For n.d. sources, check the bottom of webpage to see if there is a copyright date, or look in the weblink to see if there is a year listed. There may be a date to include in the citation.

Consider organizing into sections.

Avoid contractions.