Extra Credit

I have been giving each of you a lot of feedback over the first three weeks on paragraph/sentence structure, referencing, typos, and grammar. I have also highlighted many submissions due to organizational issues. In the lecture, I mentioned, “What if I only read the first line of every paragraph,” in order to have you focus on being very intentional with what you place in each paragraph.

Although you have the textbook to read and can observe my writing style, I wanted to share a recent reflection I wrote as a student. I am currently completing a program through Wharton Business School, one of the top programs in the country, on Neuroscience and its impact on business decisions. One of the many requirements for the week was to do a reflection on something in the lecture and address 1. 2. What technology did I choose, and describe it? An example where that technology is being used, 3. Its benefits, 4. Its limitations, and 5. Its relation to business.

I am attaching my Submission for you to review and see how I practice what I preach.

In order to get (up to 5 points) extra credit, please:

1. Put your professor hat on and review my submission.
2. What did you learn about paragraph/sentence structure?
3. What did you learn about organization and clarity despite dealing with a complicated topic?
4. Did I meet all of the requirements? Compare the requirements to the first line of each paragraph.
5. When I used a scholarly reference, did I just throw out a quote or a link? What did I do instead?