Below is the comments my professor wrote on my essay, Talia,
the paper was very insightful in places and demonstrated a very good grasp of Plato’s implied argument human nature. The paper was also well-structured. Nevertheless, there were some issues, including no proper title, inadequately contextualized quotes, needing more analysis of specific parts of quotes, and some tense problems
As mentioned on the essay prompt, there is an optional rewrite of this paper for an additional 0-24 points (out of 300). In order to do this, you need to address the issues listed below, The extra points are determined by how well you address them. The rewrite is optional and due NO LATER than Wednesday, February 11, 11:59pm
1) paper needs a proper title indicating specific topic in relation to Plato’s allegory
2) revise intro paragraph by addressing each of my line comments, including making suggested edit to thesis
3) Go through paper and revise topic sentences where indicated in my line notes
4) Go through paper and revise lead-in clauses where indicated in my line notes. Provide more specific context leadin into a quote. Example:
Early in the Allegory, Socrates, when describing the painful journey out of the cave, states, “…..”
5) Go through paper and add analysis of quotes where indicated in my line notes. Focus on discussing 1-2 specific parts of a quote and address significance, symbolism, underlying meaning, underlying assumptions, etc.
6) go through paper and convert to present tense when discussing the allegory. Only use past tense when something is already past tense in text
7) go through paper and address all my line notes labeled EDIT
Requirements: same length
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