I require a proper rewriting to this Thesis. Although the attached project is a good starting point it contained a lot of repeated information and was descriptive instead of conducting proper analysis and conclusion.
Therefore, please review the attached FEEDBACK to better understand the instructions.
Later, review the Thesis prepared and amend it to be more analytical, less repetative, and shorter as I require quality instead of quantity. Use the Resource document (attached as well) to incorporate actual cases and proper analysis into the Thesis.
Briefly, the Thesis will be an international analysis of corruption in Sport. It will examine the history, legal frameworks, and future challenges of corruption in sports. Specifically, the thesis will focus on cases related to FIFA, UEFA, the USA, and the Middle East.
The Thesis will:
1) Trace the evolution of corruption in sports from incidents of bribery and match-fixing to organized crimes and money laundering.
2) Assess currently available anti-corruption mechanisms in sports across various jurisdictions.
3) Identify potential future challenges and solutions; mainly whether international cooperation can be further implemented or enhanced in combating corruption in sports.
Suggested resources (Please use the following resource to amend the Thesis):
- https://shs.hal.science/halshs-01279785/document
- https://www.legal500.com/guides/chapter/united-states-sports-law/
- https://uncaccoalition.org/fifa-world-cup-2018-2022-bribery-report-shows-the-ugly-side-of-the-beautiful-game/
- https://www.gtlaw.com/en/insights/2026/01/saudi-arabias-new-sports-law-key-changes-for-the-sector
- https://ankura.com/insights/challenges-ahead-for-sports-integrity-in-saudi-arabia-what-can-the-kingdom-learn-from-mistakes-elsewhere
- https://www.uefa.com/running-competitions/integrity/anti-match-fixing/
- https://www.interpol.int/Crimes/Corruption/Corruption-in-sport
- chrome-extension://efaidnbmnnnibpcajpcglclefindmkaj/https://sol-intl.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/01/UAE-Sports-Law-Federal-Law-4_2023_240119_152224.pdf
- https://www.pwc.com/m1/en/services/tax/middle-east-tax-news-alerts/2026/inside-the-kingdom-new-sports-law.html
It is important to use relevant Regulations and Laws. Please refer to the UAE Sports Law Federal Law No. 4/2023 (see attached) wherever its possible even if to draw comparison with EU/US laws and developments in KSA.
Attached Files (PDF/DOCX): Federal Law No (4) of 2023 Concerning Sports.pdf, Resource and Analysis to be incorporated.docx, 4Corruption in Sport.pdf, 10206396 Corruption in Sport Revised.docx, Feedback_Redacted.pdf, 10206396 Corruption in Sport.docx, TFM Instructions MSM 2025-2026.pdf, Federal Law No (4) of 2023 Concerning Sports.pdf
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