HI , this my prof comments Overall, a good assignment though there are some issues to address I have put comments in your assignment and include it here. Apart from the comments, you need to look at the structure generally of the assignment you have loads and loads of paragraphs some of which are connected to each other some which are not there is no pattern I have suggested headings may help with this but with the others you need to look at each paragraph and decide whether it is building on the previous bit or is a brand new topic and explain that, otherwise it comes across as being just a bunch of paragraphs not really connected. References are appropriate and in a good number too.
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