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CARES Peer Review Feedback Template IND101 Writer: Reviewer: Tips to remember while reviewing: Note: The least helpful comment to receive from a peer reviewer is “It looks good to me.” Focus most of your attention on Higher Order Concerns: thesis, audience, purpose, organization, use of evidence Only address Lower Order Concerns sparingly: sentence structure, punctuation, word choice, spelling, formatting Make comments in spirit of helpfulness. Take comments in spirit of helpfulness. Congratulate What does the writer do well? (List one or more aspects.) Ask clarifying questions Part 1: What part(s) of the introduction or outline were confusing or left you with questions? Why? Part 2: What suggestions (three or fewer) do you have for revising the unclear parts? (E.g. clarify the thesis, add stronger topic sentences, proofread, change or add sources, etc.) Request more What arguments or pieces of information would you like to know more about that can enhance the paper? Evaluate its value What specific evidence did not work in this assignment (e.g. doesnt support the thesis) or could be moved to be more effective? Summarize Overall, what new information have you learned or how are you thinking differently after this reading?