Boredom is a Luxury

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This is my working thesis:

Beyond it being a byproduct of technological progress, the elimination of boredom in our society today has become an overlooked social issue rooted in productivity-driven values and the need for constant stimulation. Boredom was once unavoidable for earlier generations; it was part of daily life. But the generational shift in how boredom is understood today in contemporary culture is something our generation must acknowledge. Rather than viewing it as a negative state, its necessary for emotional processing and connection.

I already wrote 1.5 pages of the essay but it’s still being detected as being AI generated. The latter half of the essay is written by Chat GPT. Please rewrite the essay so that it is not detectable by AI. Also use some sources but nothing too serious it can be a quote from an interview–just make sure it backs up my thesis.