BIG PICTURE: What This Whole Project Is
You are writing a 7501200 word scientific essay comparing:
Two integumentary structures in two chordates
OR
Explaining an unexpected relationship between two integumentary structures
Your audience = BIO 201 + BIO 344 students (scientific but not specialists)
Your essay must:
- Focus on one central comparison
- Include evolutionary context (homology, homoplasy, convergence, synapomorphy, etc.)
- Use peer-reviewed sources
- Be clearly organized
- Be accurate
Part 1: Topic & Thesis Assignment
What You Must Do
According to the prompt :
1? Pick Your Topic
In a few words, state what you are comparing.
Example:
- Feathers vs. Mammalian Hair
- Fish Scales vs. Reptile Scales
- Cetacean Hair Loss and Evolution
2? Write a Thesis Statement
The outline rubric says your thesis must:
- Be present
- Clearly relate topic + purpose
Your thesis should:
- Make an argument
- State what you will prove
- Mention evolutionary context
Weak thesis:
This paper compares feathers and hair.
Strong thesis:
Although feathers and mammalian hair both function in insulation, they are not homologous structures but represent convergent evolutionary solutions to thermoregulation, shaped by distinct developmental pathways and evolutionary histories.
3? Provide 3 Peer-Reviewed Sources
For each:
- Full citation
- 12 sentences explaining how it supports your thesis
They must be scientific, peer-reviewed.
Part 2: Outline
This is about organization + logic.
The outline rubric requires :
Include:
- Your thesis statement
- At least TWO lines of evidence
- One must discuss evolutionary context
- Each line must have at least one peer-reviewed source
- Clear logical structure
What Lines of Evidence Means
Not just random facts.
Each section should support your thesis.
Example structure:
I. Introduction
- Background
- Thesis
II. Structure & Development
- Developmental origin
- Supporting citation
III. Evolutionary History
- Homology vs convergence
- Phylogenetic context
- Citation
IV. Function & Trade-offs
- Insulation
- Display
- Constraints
V. Conclusion
How They Grade It (Outline Rubric)
You lose points if:
- No evolutionary context
- Evidence doesnt connect to thesis
- Poor flow
- No peer-reviewed sources
Part 3: First Draft
This is your complete essay, 7501200 words
It must include:
1. Clear Central Idea
Final rubric says:
- Central idea clearly identified
2. Multiple Lines of Evidence
- Must support thesis
- No fluff
3. Evolutionary Context (VERY IMPORTANT)
Must use terms correctly:
- Homology
- Homoplasy
- Convergence
- Synapomorphy
- Plesiomorphy
If evolutionary terms are wrong you lose major points
4. Scientific Accuracy
The rubric separates:
- Evolutionary accuracy (10 pts)
- Other biological accuracy (8 pts)
No major inaccuracies.
5. Writing Style
Audience = scientists but not specialists
So:
- Use scientific terms
- But explain anything advanced
- No casual tone
- No oversimplification
6. References
Must:
- Be peer-reviewed
- Have in-text citations (if writing scientific style)
- Include Literature Cited section
7. Length
7501200 words
Over or under by >100 words = lose points.
Part 4: Final Essay Submission
This is the polished version of Writing 07.
Graded using Final Paper Rubric
Final Grading Breakdown (100 points total)
Organization (40 pts)
- Clear central idea
- Evidence supports thesis
- No fluff
- Logical flow
Accuracy (18 pts)
- Evolutionary context correct
- Biology correct
Communication (20 pts)
- Clear English
- Proper scientific style
References (10 pts)
- Peer-reviewed
- Correct citations
Mechanics (7 pts)
- Grammar
- Sentence clarity
Length (5 pts)
- 7501200 words
Topic vs. Thesis Statement ~
A topic is different from a thesis statement. Assignment 4 asks for both.
A topic is 1-3 keywords that helps the reader/grader broadly categorize your paper
A thesis statement is 1-2 sentences that that tell the reader the main point.
- You can think of it as what you would write if your whole paper were boiled down to one tweet.
- Should be a complete sentence.
Example:
- A topic (not a thesis): sexual selection
- Neither (not an argument, just a question): Why does sexual selection appear to produce some very unfit phenotypes?
- A thesis (a sentence): When one sex is the agent of selection, the fitness benefits of the optimal trait will “selfishly” go to that sex, whether or not the benefit of that particular trait is also shared with the opposite
Please make sure everything is plagrism free i need Turnitin report for ai and overall simiplarity for each part. I have attcahed all the rubrics and writing promt and instructions for this assigment.
Attached Files (PDF/DOCX): Word Requirement and Dates need by.pdf, Writing Prompt.docx, BIO344_syllabus_2026_v1 – Copy.pdf, Outline Rubric – Sheet1.pdf, Final Paper Rubric – Copy (2).pdf
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