Admissions ess1

Can you rewrite my essay using simpler, more natural language while keeping my original story and meaning the same? Please do not make it sound too formal or robotic I want it to sound like me, but clearer and more polished. Also, make sure the essay flows as one connected story instead of separate short stories. Help connect my experiences smoothly so it feels cohesive and easy to follow. If the introduction is not engaging enough, please revise it to make it more attention-grabbing while still keeping it authentic and not overly dramatic.

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